Saturday, 29 October 2016

My writing


One day when I went in a cave there was a golden orb with blue in the middle it had relics floating around it. I put my hand out and the orb came to me it took me 20 years to figure out the secret of the orb. When I figured out the secret of the orb it was a human made of relics
called Knack. I was now on a quest to stop goblins attacking.

Come on Knack we have a journey in front of us.
Rider get to trogdo mine before victor and get that key.
Katrina we are going to trogdo mine to get that key before the doctor.   
        Katrina take the key to the Airship.
Victor stop.
I believe you should stop give the key or you will cause great destruction.
But you are wrong do not open that door if i don't then what should i do well you can put the key down or you can give it to me but if i give it to you you will destroy it and if you do you will kill the earth and if you open that door you will make the destruction to the earth.
Knack go get that key and destroy it you can't let him curse destruction to the earth And all will die  as well the earth you won't get away with this but I already have wish ah. No victor.

The earth is rising just like the writing said. knack run soon whatever is in there is going to come up here. Pow! Get in the ship now. Broom. It is a giant guardian knack jump out and stop the guardians there's no way you are Katrina get out of the way no you killed victor so I am going to kill you we didn't kill him that giant orb killed him.

I worked for Victor and I will finish what we have started. Boom! Boom! Boom!  Knack put us on that rock there. You aren't going to get away that fast pew knack. I put a poison relic in him so he can die any second now. No knack destroy Katrina and take that poison relic out. Smash! Smash! Smash! And Smash!

Great work knack now do that to the guardians OK. Pow! Pow! Pow! Now to the rest. Pow! Pow! Pow! Now get up to the top of that cliff and destroy the giant orb. Roger that. There is some giant relics try to absorb them and use  them to make your way up. Roger that. I am up. Great now destroy the giant orb. Roger that.

Pow! Pow! Pow! Keep it up knack. Pow! Pow! Pow! Watch out knack it is going to absorb your relics. Ah. knack are you alright ya great now get back in there and destroy it. Roger that. Pow! Pow! Pow! Keep it up. Pow! Pow! Pow! Good work. Pow! Pow! Pow! Ya now we're talking.

Pow! Pow! Pow! Do that again and again. Pow! Pow! Pow! Ya ya. Ah one more guardian. No don't take the giant orb. No. Boom! Bash bash bash! ah my giant relics. Knack it will take more than you to take down that thing but if I power up the ship I could still help you. But doesn't it run on relics oh I forgot about that.

Knack I have a plan you can killing it and it might drop the relics. OK but how can I this small. That is a good point. I think I might know get some of your relics from your body and bring them into your hand I know it might be a bit hard for you but at least try. OK.

good work now punch. Roger that. Pow! Pow! Pow! Ya ya. Going good knack. Now punch again and again. Good now again and again. It worked now absorb the giant relics  good now punch and punch again. Roger that. Pow! Pow!pow! Keep it up then it will be over for ever and you won't ever have to live a hard life again Pow! Pow! Pow! Keep going you're going to do it I can feel it. I can to. It feels like I am going to win and I know I will I do to. Knack I feel that you are going to jump down and fill the engine. Watch out coming thru. Ah run. Boom! Now Knack fill up the engine. OK. broom. Good we will take you back and help you kill it for what it has done to us but it won't last very long beep beep beep we're going down. Boom. knack go we will be safe here from that monster. I can't leave you.  Just go. Alright. Look what you have done you monster you destroyed everything I have. Now I will destroy everything that you have. No your not going to take my relics again bash. Knack were back. Go doctor shoot it. Pew. now I will take the hit. Pow! And pow! Ah what happened I was too slow so he grabbed my hand while he could. Now it's the end knack. Ah help. I can't help you but I have to pew. Boom! Ah. now knack do it. Pow. ah. No it didn't work he's still up but in 1,000 lives I will not surrender for my world. If you do not give up then die. I will never give up my hopes not just one of them. Well then you lose all of them. Go knack finish him off for the last time in forever. Pow! Still did not  work then pew pew pew. Ya ya we did it knack. Knack. Ah what's happening to you. I am fading off. but there has got to be just one way to help you there is                                                                      
But do it fast what is it you need to put all the the giant relics together and make one more giant orb.roger that. Boom. knack your back. the next morning back at home we are awarding three heroes that have saved the world Lucas the doctor and most of all knack. These heroes have saved the world.

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  1. Wow Benji! Great narrative story. I can really see your super planning coming through into your story.

  2. wow great story very creative i can't wat till you next blog post

  3. Wow WOW WOW you really blew me away with that knack narrative I like how the knack took you back in time to find the secret of the knack. Keep doing good blog posts!! :) :) :)

  4. wow I am blown away I love that story keep it up bro :):):)

  5. i love your blog post benji ;)

  6. grate time can yuo add speach marks?